Many children these days have their own mobile phones. What are advantages and disadvantages? Give your own opinion.
In the last decade, smart phones have brought a revolution in communications industry and it has changed the way we used to communicate and gather information. Parents and even most of the youngsters have their own smart devices. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of these mobile phones and will provide the opinion that parent’s supervision is required on kids.
One of the main advantages for children having a mobile gadget is that it is a highway of information. For example, with click of a button a child can get where the pyramid of Giza is, how it was built and how old it is. Even, it is helpful to perform research for upcoming class assignment. Thus, a young kid is always able to search for topics of interest.
Secondly, smart phones provide a chance to be always connected with family and friends. Let’s take whatsapp as an example, it is providing a facility to be with loved ones whenever required. Audio, video calls, messages and even media can be shared with ease. At time of emergency it is easy to reach family and civil defence services.
Turning to the other side, youngsters are always under a threat of child abusers. They act like well-wisher and friend but there actual motives are very dangerous. Last year a gang of child abductors was caught by New York police. These criminals will search their prey on social media, will become their friend and will invite to meet. During the meeting they will kidnap the kid and will ask the family for ransom.
Another issue is that, kids become addicted to their mobile devices and this addiction starts hurting their vision, hunger and sleep patterns. A lot of parents have started complaining that kids will stay hours and hours in front of these electronic devices. A recent survey by University of Maryland has revealed that two out of ten teenagers are facing sleep and hunger deprivation because of over usage of these devices.
All the things considered, as this new technological advancement have brought some advantages of quick communication and information, it has also brought physical and psychological dangers to children. In my opinion, it is duty of parents to keep an eye on the activities of their young ones and restrict access when it is necessary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 329, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'meeting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'invite' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: meeting
...ill become their friend and will invite to meet. During the meeting they will kidnap th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1904.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 386.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93264248705 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43248042346 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7112905919 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554404145078 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3267962483 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.380952381 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.38095238095 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175841624571 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457531703611 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0615222505191 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0860200183581 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640839088342 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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