Some people argue that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to a boarding school, others suggest that children live with their families and attend a day school. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the notion of boarding school has become quite popular among parents. While some people believe boarding schools are an outstanding option for children, others think that students are better to stay with their families and attend a day school. In my opinion, students are given more advantages in boarding school than in public school.
To begin with, even though a day school is the standard educational model in most countries in the world, there are some disadvantages associated with it. Firstly, public schools typically have larger classroom sizes and higher ratios compared to any other type of schools which directly affects the teaching quality. As an evidence, with an abundance of students, it is impossible for teachers to truly focus on each student’s strengths and weaknesses. Therefore, students who struggle with learning difficulties or are particularly gifted may not be able to access the one-on-one tailored attention they need. Secondly, sending childrens to a day school can actually place more demand on parents’ time. Given the fact that the time spent on travelling between home and school, making children’s meals or taking responsibility for their homework eats significantly into parents’ day. As a result, it may not be an ideal choice with working parents who are too busy with work to take care of their kids.
In addition, there is no denying that boarding schools offer a great deal of benefits that are not available in most conventional schools. Going to boarding school cultivates children self-reliance, getting them used to the idea of being away from home. As boarders do not have their parents around who wake them up or help to do the laundry, they have to learn to fend for themselves and do their own work without waiting for any assistance. For example, they have to buy their essential items or make sure that their school uniforms are washed and ironed. Hence, it equips students with the independence they need to succeed when they leave the education system altogether and go out to work. Moreover, boarding schools allow students to reach their teachers round the clock as they are always available on campus in order to help their students gain a better understanding of any subject and achieve good grades. As a result, it is estimated that each year, over 90% of the boarding school students go on to earn an advanced degree compared to only 75% of public school students do.
In conclusion, every parent has to take in ensuring that their child gets the best education. I tend to believe that boarding schools offer a more inclusive approach to education, in comparison with day schools.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, hence, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 440.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06363636364 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57997565096 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70580948307 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 243.0 176.041082164 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552272727273 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1803272081 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.263157895 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1578947368 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.52631578947 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414567165755 0.244688304435 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132142601743 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101398226053 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267674839223 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108619265693 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.