Some people argue that it is good for children to stay away from their families and go to a boarding school, others suggest that children live with their families and attend a day school. What is your opinion?
Nowadays, the notion of boarding school has become quite popular among many parents. While some people believe boarding schools are an outstanding option for children, others think that students are better to stay with their families and attend a day school. In my opinion, students are given more advantages in boarding school than in public school.
On the one hand, there are certain conveniences of admitting a child in a day school. Firstly, day schools are a preferred option as their tuition fees are much less expensive than a boarding school which helps parents reduce more or less financial burden. For instance, Japanese students do not need to pay tuition fees in most public schools, but the expenses in boarding school can reach up to $20000 a year. Secondly, day school is a better choice for parents who wish to have close supervision over their children. Because it enables constant parent-teacher contact and therefore, it opens an ability for parents to monitor their child's progress in terms of both academics and extra curricular activities. To be more specific, parents can get to play a hands-on role in helping with their kids’ homeworks and projects, which can contribute to their children's academic success.
On the other hand, there is no denying that boarding schools offer a great deal of benefits that are not available in most conventional schools. When a child gets older, he or she may develop the maturity to handle the independence that comes with boarding school. As boarders do not have their parents around who wake them up or help to do the laundry, they have to learn to fend for themselves and do their own work without waiting for any assistance. For example, they have to buy their essential items or make sure that their school uniforms are washed and ironed. Moreover, compared to day schools where teachers are available only for a certain period, boarding schools allow students to reach their teachers round the clock as they are always available on campus in order to help their students gain a better understanding of any subject and achieve good grades. As a result, it is estimated that 50 % of the boarding school students go on to earn an advanced degree while only 21% of public school students do.
In conclusion, although both arguments have their own merits, I tend to believe that the benefits provided by boarding schools are far more than day schools do.
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Message: The proper name in singular (childs) must be used with a third-person verb: 'progresses'.
Suggestion: progresses
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, more or less, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2016.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94117647059 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57355840699 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514705882353 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 596.7 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.0026666984 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3125 7.06120827912 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405453846154 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152288701654 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100291142912 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276779695627 0.151304729494 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0961696237926 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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