More people tend to believe that having a satisfying job provides better life quality than business which is made for just a well-paid job, whereas others have opposite opinion. I support the first given idea and my personal view will be explained in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, It is no doubt true that people have to work for sustain their lifespan and so a lot of people work in jobs they do not want. Besides, the problem of unemployment is added in many countries and people can slog away at a work instead of worklessness. It causes to some health and psychological issues on worker and personal's private life. For example, if employee can not have job pleasure and force them to go work each day, labored get into depression. Recent searches offer many proof about affect of reluctant work on worker. It is said that 87 percent of employees worldwide are unhappy.
Another reason why people should have an enjoyable job is that we spend most of our life working in a job and have been working in the same job for years. Therefore, we will able to look back in happily come to the age of 60 when we work savorily. Moreover, worker productivity in work will also remain and we will hazard an opinion about innovation of our fields by ourselves. I think that people can make financial gains as long as they make an effort.
On the other hand, there is an important point I would like to raise here that some people believe a lot of money ensure a good lifespan because they may have a hard time making ends meet. For instance, staffer want to become a homeowner or send their children to the best school. But some type of people always want more and for this reason they seek well-paid job even if their income is sufficient.
To sum up, the first priority of people should be job contentedness and then they should care about their earnings so as to a happier life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 116, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...n they should care about their earnings so as to a happier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1547.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52339181287 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43962177109 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6457724527 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.6875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256616308579 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075838713366 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0727441326098 0.0667982634062 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143884014814 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478421522227 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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