Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Opinions differ as to whether a good salary or a high level of job satisfaction serves people better. In my opinion, I lean towards to a good salary as money provides people’s needs and brings happiness.
To begin with, it is understandable why some people say that a pleasant job takes precedence over the earnings of money. One reason is that an enjoyable work and its friendly environment may help workers boost their creativity and productiveness at work. Working with nice and cooperative colleagues to accomplish a task within people’s knowledge could facilitate the achievement of success at the end of the day. In Vietnam, for example, surveys say that many office workers are motivated to finish their assignments faster with minimum mistakes thanks to their enjoyable working environment.
However, I side with those who think that a good salary offers more benefits than just job satisfaction. One reason to support my standpoint is that, in this material world, individuals need more money to financially support themselves and their families. Knowing that higher amount of work will gain people more income, they will be absolutely more encouraged to give extra efforts for their jobs even when their work environment is not very supportive. This money will then be used for their families’ basic requirements and entertainments. For instance, white-collar workers in New York still contribute to their companies with a hundred percent of efforts to obtain great paycheck regardless of the extremely high intensity at work.
In conclusion, I assert that a high income is definitely leading people to a happier life by supplying their needs and increasing living standards.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether a good salary or a high level of job sa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, still, then, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06682769303 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618518518519 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4671209244 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198701954839 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823522014716 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646845971117 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128651303243 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583563493223 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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