Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think consumers are influenced by advertisements? What measures can be taken to protect them?
Advertisement has become a useful tool for companies to promote their products and to get the consumers’ attention nowadays. With the growth of commercial industry, advertisements are now being overused by competing corporations, which causes some issues that bother the majority of consumers. However, there are several solutions to address these problems.
To begin with, the increasing numbers of advertisements are making a big influence on the consumers. The problem to mention is that a huge amount of commercials on TV or the internet is annoying people when they are watching contents. At some point, these adverts can be very invasive and thus, they can be considered as harassment by the companies. For example, in a 45-minute TV show in Vietnam, there are more than five advertisements every ten minutes, which is super annoying for the viewers. The next problem to address is the content of the adverts. Since there are too many commercials, parents cannot control what type of advertisements their children watch. Thus, the contents that kids view on TV or the internet can be inappropriate or unsuitable. As a consequence, such bad commercials may influence kids to develop bad behaviours.
However, there are a few effective ways to solve the aforementioned issues. Firstly, governments can enact laws that restrict the TV or internet providers from showing too many adverts. For instance, since the establishment of TV commercials in Vietnam, the amount of advertisements has been greatly reduced. Secondly, the content of every advert should be strictly filtered by appropriate policies from the media providers. By doing this, parents will no longer be afraid of footages that their children view.
In conclusion, the increasing numbers of advertisements have created some problems for the consumers. However, these issues can be tackled by the involvement of the governments and the change in policies of the media providers.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38762214984 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19154417604 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.527687296417 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.7593827981 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.8888888889 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24789946868 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0692232640982 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592534776814 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145989519451 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315112561971 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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