Some people argue job satisfaction is more important than job security. Others believe a permanent job is more important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some individuals believe that job gratification is more essential than job safety while others express an opposing viewpoint that an eternal occupation is by far of great significance. From my perspective, while the latter view is plausible to a certain extent, I would side with those who support the former argument.
On the one hand, those who advocate the tend to point out a combination of evident explanations. The initial merits is that having a long-lasting job does wonders for employees in terms of financial management. As opposed to constantly changing occupations to meet job satisfaction, workers who choose to work permanently are able to receive better support in the form of money in difficult times. Another advantage is that laborers embodying fidelity and loyalty to one job can develop improved bonding with their management board. As a result, they will earn ample chances of promotion prospects or be granted perks and bonuses.
On the other hand, as sensible and beneficial as it is, I concur with those who advocate the view that job satisfaction is more crucial than job security. To begin with, meeting employees’ demand on a variety of working aspects exerts an advantageous impact on their focus and efficiency at work. For instance, employees being provided with sports or entertainment equipment to suit their needs and desires are less likely to suffer from stress or burnout, noticeably enhancing laborer's productivity and concentration. Additionally, it is extremely vital for employers to satisfy employees’ needs and demands in order to reduce turnover rate. If a worker is satisfied by their job managers on what they desire, they are less likely to resign from their work, making it much easier for employers to manage human resources and retain talents.
In conclusion, as both dark and bright sides of the picture are noticed, it is understandable why many people believe that having a permanent job is of great significance, however, I am convinced that job fulfillment is more essential than job protection.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1734.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23867069486 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0346616198 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598187311178 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 540.0 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6918641469 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.384615385 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4615384615 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267764334325 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915876205544 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115776612879 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189112554709 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0844446071152 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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