Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
How much freedom children should be given to make their own decision is a widely debated topic among parents. Some believe that, if children start deciding for themselves, they would become more self centered. However, others opine that children have right to make a choice as far as they are concerned. I think sometimes parents should leave children to choose for them, yet other time they should interfere, if they think that choice is not going to take them in right path.
On one hand, a part of crowd accord that, it is pivotal for children to decide for their everyday matters, since maximum parents are working nowadays and unable to stay with their children for the whole day. For instance, my sister and her husband are employed, so my neice has to get ready for her school by her own. Not only that, she also has to choose her dress and make every little dicisions regarding day to day activities. Making their own dicision is not only important for them in their present time, but also will help them in future to make wise choices regarding significant aspects of life.
On the other hand, others claiming that, the much freedome will be given to children, the more they will become self centered. Since if children is free to decide for all the matters for themselves, there will be a great chance for them to become egocentric and avoid caring about others. Moreover, they will start dominating others by imposing their decisions, and consequently it will become difficult for them to work in a group and make friends. Hence, becoming decisive would put a detrimental impact on the personality of children as well as affect their relationship with others.
In summary, there is no doubt that freedome to make own choices is the right of an individual. I believe, generally, parents should provide opportunity to their kids to make minor decision along with teaching them to not harm the feelings of others, however they should restrict their choices in some crucial aspects of life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well, as to, for instance, i think, in summary, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83430232558 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42753097585 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505813953488 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7778991471 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.785714286 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5714285714 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2142857143 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230723716466 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0926912158667 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436571641192 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152569284137 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317298428062 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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