Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Freedom of choice among children has become a source of controversy recently. While there has been a common belief that children should be given the liberty to choose what they want on a daily basis, I would argue that they should only be allowed to decide on subjects that are related to them.
It is encouraged that children who are given self-control on daily matters at a young age would turn out to be independent later in life. The first reason behind this is that by taking the initiatives in everyday's life, the child can improve its critical thinking and develop its taste and preferences. As a result, its decision-making process can be fastened when he or she faces with more complex issues in the future. On top of that, giving them the control can help children in their self-exploring process. Being born in the world full of diversities, kids should be given freedom to embark on their journeys to discover their true selves. For example, when being asked which food do they want to eat, the child can decide what they want and develop their own tastes on food.
On the other hand, from my point of view, youngsters should only make choices with regards to themselves. Since they are not matured enough, they can be tempted to behave falsely like eating junk foods instead of nutritious meals. Therefore, it is the parents' role to give them guidance and instructions base on their experience. In this circumstances, freedom to make small decisions like which pet to have among the options given by the parents is a great start for the kid. This under-control freedom will still make room for children to grow as well as keeping them away from distractions and negative influences.
For the above-mentioned reasons, from my perspective, it is advisable for parents not only to give their kin permissions to decide on relevant matters but also keep close eyes on their choices.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'parents'' or 'parent's'?
Suggestion: parents'; parent's
... nutritious meals. Therefore, it is the parents role to give them guidance and instruct...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...structions base on their experience. In this circumstances, freedom to make small de...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, as a result, as well as, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1574.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8282208589 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6859187178 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8488362733 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.428571429 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2857142857 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205558338755 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070360083778 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0305765037969 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124202208244 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332190315454 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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