Nowadays, children have become independent because of modern world therefore, a few folks ponder that teenagers should allow to choose daily basis matters. Which related to food, clothes and entertainment. Whereas, rest of the masses think that they make appropriate decision about it. Thus, I will discuss both side's view points in up coming paragraphs.
To commence with, there are various arguments related to this statement but first and foremost is that youngsters enjoy their freedom due to this. In another words, if teenagers choose their favorite items to eat, then will happy while eating these foods which is extremely helpful for their progressing. Apart from this, if parents do not involved in kid's matters then children will give more respect to their parents. Because, youngsters do not like that some force them for something or put any kind of restriction on them .Moreover, their parents do not allow them to entertain themselves. However, if teenagers do something to enjoy their free time such as, games in order to this, sometimes they have accurate experience about these games and play to them professionally, and get name and fame around the world. Which is extremely beneficial for their economic status.
On the other side, I believe that teenagers had better discuss their matters with their parents because in early ages, they do not have much knowledge related to life. In the case of eating and clothing sometimes, they give more importance to eat junk foods which lead detrimental impacts on their health, and if they wear western cloths, then they will forget their own culture and divert from their moral path. Subsequently, if teenagers allow to do something for spening their free time, then may not do something for education and spend their whole time on leisure activities which lead bad impacts on their study. Owing to this, they can be diverted from their moral path.
To sum up, it is lucid that teenagers have a right to choose their food items and cloths but, i deem that children do not have appropriate thinking to choose right thing. Hence, parents had batter help their kids in these matters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: battered
... choose right thing. Hence, parents had batter help their kids in these matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, thus, whereas, while, apart from, kind of, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02521008403 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48298116988 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540616246499 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5511977803 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.125 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3125 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230563478299 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790964808837 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0367959796096 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13872153498 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0359533730537 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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