Nowadays, markets are flooded with lot of products because of modern world. Therefore, everyone wants to busy these thing, and sometimes they can buy useless things. I believe that various reasons behind this trend and this problem can be solved to take some appropriate actions against it.
To commence with, there are many reasons that prople are under to dept because they buy useless and expensive prodcuts or things. First and foremost is that there are many markets, which give massive discount on brended things owing to this, middle class people always influence from these kinds of offers, and sometimes they can buy needless things. Such as, various online sites as well as shopping malls give heavily discounts on fashionable things like, buy one get two free. As a result, they will face numerous detrimental problems and sometimes they will become bankcrupt. Apart from this, masses influence from their peers because when their friends buy somethings such as, expensive mobile phones, laptops and brended shoes as well as cloths so, they also want to busy these things. Moreover, nowadays, various advertisements are being hosted by famous actors, they influence from these ads.
On the other hand, this problem can be solved by some useful measures. Firstly, government had better ban fashion related advertisements therefore, people cannot use buy useless things. Secondly, people should buy things or products acccording their pocket money or they should take loan from banks which they will use in their diifficult times or they can spend this money useful and othey things which they need. Hence, they can buy only useful things instead of, other things.
To sum up, it is clear that people are spending too much money on useless things but, I think that this problem solve to apply some rules or measures.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 111, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this thing' or 'these things'?
Suggestion: this thing; these things
...orld. Therefore, everyone wants to busy these thing, and sometimes they can buy useless thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, apart from, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13712374582 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29889263074 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551839464883 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8206920648 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321016917379 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121600504779 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708356098134 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.212118412044 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445250210693 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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