It is irrefutable to say everyone wants to get a lucrative job because of competitive era. While a few masses ponder that university's degree enough to get better job for teenagers. Whereas, rest of the individuals believe that they need to work experience to take job. Therefore, I agree with latter view of point and I will discuss both sides opinions in upcoming paragraphs along with my views.
To commence with, education plays a vital role in everyone's life. In another words, these days, children need to study everything to enhance their knowledge as well as information related to their profession. Such as, if a child wants to become a doctor or a teacher, then he or she will needs to study this feild related subjects. As a result he will get lucrative job in their future because of their acedemic experience. Apart from that, if youngsters take addimission in university, then sometimes they will enroll in placement and get a lucrative job just owing to their university's education as other things.
However, I believe that job experience is extremely helpful for students, who want to take a lucrative job in coming time. Nowadays, multinational companies wants better emplyors for their industry to enhance the productivity in order to that these companies give prority to those individuals, who have appropriate job experience before. Moreover, people's personality and behaviour also beneficial for getting better job opportunities. For example, number of industries give more importance to employer's traits, way of talking as against to their educational degrees.
To sum up, altough university's degree important to enhance knowledge about every professions but, in my opinion, job experience and other traits of personlity play a povital role to get job opportunities.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...enough to get better job for teenagers. Whereas, rest of the individuals believe that ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o get better job for teenagers. Whereas, rest of the individuals believe that the...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'need'
Suggestion: need
...octor or a teacher, then he or she will needs to study this feild related subjects. A...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, well, whereas, while, apart from, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1510.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26132404181 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01515956767 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8246014813 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4285714286 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255570414166 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090635427857 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061229657236 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168559277433 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614839456772 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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