Many believe that to become an artist one needs special talent or skills, others say that anyone with a passion can become a good artist. I believe, certain skills are needed to perform some art forms, however, having a passion in doing something like music, painting or acting is of greater importance.
People across the globe have started to develop interest in different form of art. This has resulted due to the busy and tiring life style of an individual. Having a hobby like dance, music or painting helps people to relax and relieve their stress level. For most of the people this hobby becomes passion and they get involved in it to such an extent that they master it. So, its not always people who built a career in music can only become a good musician or a person taking acting classes can only become a better actor. For instance, many new pop bands became popular out of their passion rather than those who studied music and selected it as a career.
On the other hand, people often argue that one requires necessary skills to gain popularity in any art form. Certain skills are inherited by an individual from their parents, so it is believed that, that person will master it. At times genetic predisposition do play a major role in development of skills, however it is not the same for every one. For example, a son or a daughter of a film star do not necessarily achieve the same stardom as their parents, they might have the required skills buy they lack the same level of passion as of their parents. An individual can perform better just by having limited skill in their field of interest.
In conclusion, a way to master the field of your interest is to become passionate about it, rather than just having the key skills. Also, having the special skills do not necessarily give you success in performing different art forms. So, in the end dedication and passion can help a person to be a good musician, dancer, actor or a painter.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...such an extent that they master it. So, its not always people who built a career in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1613.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6217765043 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39422928912 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538681948424 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3416816972 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.8125 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213883576219 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.075342307316 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484828495576 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144373725862 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332296613431 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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