Some people believe that the best way to travel within a city is by car. Others believe it is best to travel by bicycle.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Which transportation system is best to travel within a city to be continues controversial topic in peoples' life. While some people claim that using cars is a good idea to travel, others think it is best to travel by bike. There are arguments on both sides this very topical debate, now I will outline them.
To begin with, although while using cars in the city centre, people face traffic jams, some people prefer to use cars in order to travel other cities.However, individuals have arrived their destination more faster campared to other land transports owing to its speed. Furthermore, utilizing cars more comfortable for all people because they can travel any time they want by their private cars.Unless people use cars to travel, they will be lateness their destination.
On the other hand, using bicycle in the city not only wholesome for our health, but also it is constantly free of charge. If people use bike to travel, it would be definitely positive impact on peoples' health.Though driving a bicycle require lots of force, the majority of elder people use those vehicle in the city in order to be healhly person.Moreover, people do not face traffic congestions, as a result, they do not late their destination. In addition, using bicycle positive impact on our environment because bikes do not emit toxic gas on air.
To sum up, I think that using bikes more useful than using cars because cars commit air pollution with their toxic gas. Using bicycle not just reduce air pollution but also traffic jams.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, while, i think, in addition, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1268.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93385214008 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69292749043 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552529182879 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.0389904984 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.8 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.6 7.06120827912 193% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270981016405 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126525216718 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0989533296355 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181873029665 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959391078038 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.