Some people believe that boys and girls behave differently only because society teaches them that they are different. What is your view?
Children are created in different gender, specifically boys and girls and they act in a different way. Some citizens believe that those boys and girls perform differently because of society only, while others believe that there is another point of view to explain.
It is true that society, especially family, contribute to the children’s attitude. With the assistance of parents, children will be taught that each of them is different so that they will act wisely based on their gender. In addition, the particular environment such as the neighborhood and the local culture also become the factor of educating children why they should act differently. Other citizens will criticize them when the inappropriate activities appear and sometimes there will be a cultural punishment as a consequence.
Besides society, there are some factors in this issue. Anatomically, the boys have a stronger structure of bones which makes their physical strength are bigger than girls. Moreover, the percentage of hormones produced in boys and girls, testosterone and estrogen, will affect the psychology of them whether to behave more masculine or more feminine. Eventually, those factors stated will make children know which activities are more appropriate based on their sex.
All in all, I believe that the anatomy and psychology which consist of children’s body also affect and control them to conduct naturally as the boys and girls. However, it should be supervised by the parents and the surroundings as the social controller for the children for the qualified characters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a different way" with adverb for "different"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...pecifically boys and girls and they act in a different way. Some citizens believe that those boys ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, so, while, in addition, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3967611336 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97030272707 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558704453441 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9714169001 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.083333333 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5833333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219221973059 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799104788015 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0945030616095 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147323605625 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.132656613019 0.056905535591 233% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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