Some people believe that children should listen to and obey their parents. Others believe that children should think and do things on their own. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
This essay is a discussion about different views on what is right for children. Children, no doubt require parental guidance. However, there are some people who believe that children should take decisions on their own. In my opinion, children need to take guidance from their parents. The essay elaborates the views of both the aspects
On one hand, it is certain for parents to steer their child till a suitable age, so that they can understand the difference between the right and the wrong. Usually, a toddler will always look up to his parents and wait for their approval before doing or trying anything new. For instance, a child would not know to write the alphabets naturally unless the parents step in and guide the child in proper way. For instance, a child should not interfere with someone else’s belongings unless they are asked to do so. That This is when parents should step in and guide the child about what is right and what is acceptable. correct the child’s fault. There are many such instances in a child’s life when parents play an important role in introducing the child to acceptable behavior and norms of the society. Such is an example compared to other instances in life wherein parental guidance is required.
On the other hand, modern parents are so much open minded that they let their children make decisions. This idea gives the child to take the initiative of making their own decisions, learning to grow, making and overcoming their mistakes. For example, when children are given a chance to make decisions on their own, their self-confidence boosts up. This can help them discover who they are, what do they enjoy, likes, dislikes and so on. Even if they make mistakes, it is their mistakes and not their parents’. Mistakes too teach us many things, but children should also learn to take responsibility for their actions. So, letting children take their own decisions and being responsible for them is also a good way of parenting. For example, if the parents are stereotypic, the child if left free to do his own will, shall have a wide view on stereotypes like the negativity of it and may become a more of an open minded person who doesn’t get affected by such social issues.
Therefore, keeping both the views in mind, in my opinion, children should not only be allowed to take decisions on their own but as well as at times be under with parental supervision. In this way, they can make decisions and also learn from them. This will help in making the child a better individual and a leader of the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 621, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Correct
... what is right and what is acceptable. correct the child’s fault. There are many such ...
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Line 3, column 523, Rule ID: TOO_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'to teach'?
Suggestion: to teach
...stakes and not their parents’. Mistakes too teach us many things, but children should als...
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Line 4, column 130, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...owed to take decisions on their own but as well as at times be under with parental supervi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, no doubt, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2115.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 445.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75280898876 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59293186426 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52213130505 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480898876404 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8650352364 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.9565217391 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.347826087 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95652173913 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340561129402 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112587833935 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0974289573614 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241935514325 0.151304729494 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115710252813 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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