Some people believe that childrens leisure activities must be educational. otherwise they are complete waste of time. do you agree or disagree with the statement. give reason of your answer and include example from experience.
Education is the best key to open the lock of success. Presently, groups of people reckned that youngsters must spend free time by doing knowledgeable activities. Here, I would like to discord with the given statement.
Manifold points are there to support my point of view. First and foremost, student's can reduce the stress and monotonous of study by playing fun activities. To illustrate, children can feel extra burden and they are unable to concentrate on study as their mind stop thinking if they spend most of their time on educational activities.On the other side, fun time activities confer student's pleasure and joy and they feel relaxe for some time. Therefore, other activities are essential to keep mind fresh and stress free.
Further, emphasising on my point of view. Other activities helps student's to depicts the interest in other activities. Taking a real life example into consideration, in my school time.we did numerous other activities such as painting, cooking, singing, dancing in our free periods. These activities enhance my interest in painting and cooking. Now I have a great cullinury skills in cooking which are lucrative for me.Thus, student's can polish their potential in other skills by doing other activities.
To recapitulate, Undeniably, educational activities are imperative for student's. However, still I believe that they should spend free time on other activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1192.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36936936937 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89915173049 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 62.3783714479 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1428571429 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8571428571 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146110492405 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047878840092 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455082106684 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0997900219001 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250428014059 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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