Globalisation more or less affect almost every part of civilised world. International companies intensively seeking new territories where open their businesses as developed countries do not offer many space to grow. While some believe that countries should develop their own companies, I side with those who feel that multinational companies should do that.
On the one hand it could be argued that developing national companies will keep all the profit in the country. International companies pay just taxes in territories they operate their business and the net profit is transferred to their homelands. What is more, advocates of establishing national businesses believe that national companies will gain more trust among the members of public. Take Czech republic for example. Coca-Cola is top selling coke drink in the world, however, not in The Czech Republic. Local product Kofola is for decades top seller not only in The Czech, but also in Slovakia. The power of local brand engaged generations and prevent them to purchase internationally well know and best seller product.
However, I side with those who believe that multinational companies should be allowed to open their branches and offices in any country. It is fact that people craving for globally well known brands such as McDonald or Starbucks. Putting restrictions to retailers can probably lead to the fact that majority of young people will move overseas. Moreover, in my opinion, international companies are more likely to offer more jobs that national companies coordinated by authorities, therefore, more jobs could be offered to public. However, perhaps my strongest argument for allowing multinational companies to enter local markets is that their undoubtedly boost local economics. Not only they construct new building, but also will they pay high taxes. As a reason of this fact, national economy will rise and get stronger.
In short, although it is undeniable that people can be easily engaged to local products and business' profit will remain in the country. Therefore, on balance, I believe that multinational companies will satisfied local needs, provide many new jobs and last but not least will boost national economy.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 197, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun space seems to be countable; consider using: 'many spaces'.
Suggestion: many spaces
...ses as developed countries do not offer many space to grow. While some believe that countr...
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Line 7, column 204, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'satisfy'
Suggestion: satisfy
...lieve that multinational companies will satisfied local needs, provide many new jobs and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in short, such as, in my opinion, more or less, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1869.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38616714697 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85131378195 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536023054755 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1908307885 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3684210526 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2631578947 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232224340103 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703909436814 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968205816462 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159669306213 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10722237844 0.056905535591 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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