It goes without saying that crime has being major problem's in the society of all over the world significantly. The crime rate has increasing day by day dramatically. Specifically there are some motive to crime, such as social crux, poverty, easy money, laziness and unemployment. In other hand some people's commit in crime in naturally and also some one got influence by other's. Personally I feel that crime is a result of social problems and poverty. Let us examine both views before reaching a concrete decision.
To begin with, some people's have been directly related in crime naturally. However, some people's commit influence by skin persons. There is a word a criminal son must be a criminal too in future, because of impact. For example; world one number terrorist Osman bin laden son has become a terrorist too as his father. Moreover, a bad person will be always bad if he doesn't want to change. In word, some time environment is owing to commit in crime. A very good example is, slum people's have a good opportunity trend to commit in crime drastically. So government must need to keep eye on slum people to reduce the crime.
It's true that, social problems and poverty is the main fact to commit in crime significantly. There is a some major issue that forcing in crime. Firstly, lack of awareness about fate of drug. All over the world specially young generation are addicted in various illegal drugs and alcohol. As a addicted person they have to take the drugs regularly. As a result, they become involved with crime according to earn money. So in this situation awareness is necessary and government should be more concern in drugs low. Secondly, poverty and unemployment is other reason to do such as crime. For example; Mostly, undeveloped and developing country's people's are struggling with short of money. As long as they commit to crime for better life. Regarding to solve the poverty and unemployment crux government can provide some loan to poor people's and free vocational training to unemployment people's to get a job. Thirdly, easy money, and white-collar crime has become peak problems all over the world.
That is to say, A sustainable solution is needed to reduce the social problems and poverty, unless, crime can't be control. Now is the time to fight against crime and make some death penalty low against the crime.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 195, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'motives'?
Suggestion: motives
...amatically. Specifically there are some motive to crime, such as social crux, poverty,...
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Line 1, column 346, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'someone'?
Suggestion: someone
...s commit in crime in naturally and also some one got influence by others. Personally I f...
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Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...d a criminal son must be a criminal too in future, because of impact. For example; world ...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., a bad person will be always bad if he doesnt want to change. In word, some time envi...
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Line 5, column 290, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d in various illegal drugs and alcohol. As a addicted person they have to take the...
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Line 5, column 293, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...n various illegal drugs and alcohol. As a addicted person they have to take the d...
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Line 7, column 107, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ial problems and poverty, unless, crime cant be control. Now is the time to fight ag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, i feel, in fact, such as, as a result, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.885 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66439017413 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5175 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5009626317 49.4020404114 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.7857142857 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2857142857 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 21.0 3.9879759519 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350839634388 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100069476939 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0850780787782 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237443722688 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0784384433991 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.43 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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