There is little room for doubt that tourism is one of the fastest-growing industries in the world.
However, its impact on culture remains a source of constant debate. This essay will elaborate on both
positive and negative effects of tourism from a cultural perspective.
Providing economic incentives for cultural preservation is unarguably one of the main contributions
of tourism. To many tourists, culture and history are what they first consider when choosing a
destination. Their mindset has been recognized by many tourism sites and money has been
subsequently directed toward cultural protection, including the maintenance of key historical sites.
Tourism is therefore one of the primary forces contributing to the preservation of a culture.
In addition to raising financing, tourism can make an indigenous culture known to the world and rally
support worldwide to protect it. When a historic site or a site that shows a country's cultural heritage is
made accessible to the public, visitors from all over the world will soon flock there. They will share
their experience in the local culture with their friends and families once they return home, assisting
this site to gain international fame. Both financial and technological support will flood in for the
conservation of natural and cultural resources.
On the negative side, tourism develops sometimes at the expense of part of culture. Food, festivals,
costumes and other stimulating elements of a culture tire highlighted to entertain tourists, constituting
an insult to the locals and causing damage to the unique nature of a culture. Moreover, cultural
commercialization has made the sacred elements of a culture commonplace and tourists are
encouraged to attach little importance to a unique tradition, which cannot be found elsewhere.
In the light of these facts, one can conclude that tourism is neither a boon nor a bane to cultural
preservation. While its endeavor to protect an indigenous culture should be recognized, it has put the
integrity of a culture at risk.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 31, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'sometimes' is usually put before the verb 'develops'.
Suggestion: sometimes develops
...sources. On the negative side, tourism develops sometimes at the expense of part of culture. Food...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45341614907 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09197013411 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55900621118 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1905131063 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 22.0 4.38176352705 502% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253036638549 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882524782113 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368006199091 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724214419706 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337649573451 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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