Some people believe that developing countries should concentrate on improving industrial skills whereas others argue that these countries should promote education first. Discuss the both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
It is true that some skeptics would advocate that the concentration on industrial skills of the developing country should be the most concerned. However, there are others who argue that education should be the top priority of these nations. In my opinion, I will outline several rational reasons to support the latter idea.
To begin with, there are some advantages of enhancing industrial skills. Since developing countries usually lack skillful and productive workers, governments should make investments in vocational training courses to improve the working skills in order to provide a sufficient workforce for society. As a result, not only do many well-qualified workers would be produced but also the salaries generated by them increase significantly. For example, Vietnamese workers are recently able to increase their incomes as well as working experiences due to the establishment of many low-cost industrial schools supported by the government.
However, I believe that promoting education plays the most important role in the growth of developing nations. Firstly, education provides individuals with fundamental knowledge which is the vital key for the sustainable development of the society. For instance, smartphones which have become increasingly popular nowadays are the combination of many complex and high-tech devices which cannot be made without wide knowledge about science subjects such as mathematics and informatics. Secondly, when people are right oriented and well-educated, they would raise their awareness of regulations and laws introduced by officials and authorities. Therefore, individuals would have good lifestyles contributing to the long-term human enhancement of developing countries.
In conclusion, I think developing countries should pay more attention to evolving education rather than industrial skills because it can bring well-rounded and stable developments for both humanity and society.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.92526690391 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16488775185 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637010676157 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9756429072 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.076923077 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.6923076923 7.06120827912 222% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282076513439 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.095757754209 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931100124405 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185825657714 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0900821486892 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.11 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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