Some people believe that developing countries should concentrate on improving industrial skills whereas others argue that these countries should promote education first. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
People have different opinions as to whether developing nations should place a high priority on enhancing industry-related skills or education. While I understand that the enhancement of working skills could be beneficial to some degree/extent, I would contend that education should be prioritized.
On the one hand, there are some possible benefits of improving industrial skills. Firstly, since developing countries often lack workers with specialized ability/required expertise, the governments of these countries should invest more in training and enhancing working skills to provide sufficient workforce. In a Vietnamese firm specializing in electricity and automatic engineering, for instance, there are merely a few workers capable of being promoted to a technician or engineer, which could severely affect the work flow. Besides, industrial skills training could also increase productivity since when staff has a well-rounded skill set, they are more likely to perform efficiently and productively. As a result, more revenue would be created not only for the business but also for the nation as a whole.
However, I would argue that promoting education is a more effective pathway towards success for developing nations. First and foremost, education is often considered the optimal way to maintain a high intellectual level of human resources, which determines the future and prosperity of a country. Undoubtedly, no economies developed without having a host of intellects, such as scientists or experts in different areas. Another importance of a well-structured education is that it promotes effective communication, allowing new ways to trade with other countries. Undeniably, healthy economic partnerships with overseas enterprises are inevitable for the growth of a nation, and well-educated people are often able to communicate effectively and have more opportunities to interact with others across the globe. Therefore, investing more in the education system is crucial to strengthen the nation.
In conclusion, while working skills could bring some advantages, I reckon that economically emerging nations should pay more attention to allocating their resource to education because of its benefits to the country’s development in the long run.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1943.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.83483483483 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3408486014 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594594594595 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 616.5 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5343247415 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.785714286 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26059657826 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869326094069 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614406685353 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163585335983 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315766821177 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.75 50.2224549098 45% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.83 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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