Some people believe that developing countries should concentrate on improving industrial skills whereas others argue that these countries should promote education first. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.
People have different opinions as to whether developing nations should put their focus on enhancing industry-related skills or education. While I understand that the enhancement of working skills could be beneficial to some degree, I would contend that education should be seen as a number one priority.
On the one hand, there are some possible benefits of improving industrial skills. Firstly, developing economies have had trouble filling basic skilled production jobs on plant floors when plenty of manufacturers are unable to recruit sufficiently skilled employees. In Vietnam, for instance, there are merely a few workers being capable of becoming a technician or engineer in electric and automatic engineering companies, which could severely affect economic growth. Besides, industrial skills training could also increase productivity since when staff has a well-rounded skill set, they are more likely to perform efficiently and effectively. As a result, more revenue would be created not only for the company itself but also for the whole nation.
However, I am of the view that promoting education is the most effective pathway to success for developing nations. First and foremost, education is the optimal way to keep a high quality of human resources, which determine the future and survival of a country. Undoubtedly, there are no economies developing without having a host of intellects, such as scientist or experts in different areas. Another importance of a well-structured education is it promotes effective communication, allowing new ways to trade with other countries in many ways. It is undeniable that healthy and open relationships are inevitable for the growth of a nation, and well-educated people can be able to communicate effectively and have more opportunities to interact with others across the globe. Therefore, it is crucial to should invest more in their education system in order to strengthen the nation.
In conclusion, while working kills could bring some advantages, I reckon that emergent nations should pay more attention to enhancing education because of its benefits to the country’s development in the long run.
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... itself but also for the whole nation. However, I am of the view that promoting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i reckon, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1840.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52552552553 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1447363712 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600600600601 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8371977399 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.428571429 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7857142857 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6428571429 7.06120827912 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240679248996 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081117497388 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534677532259 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150846642173 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434130424195 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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