Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Artificial intelligence a vast science discovered by scientists in the 21st century, which makes machine smarter and has a human mind. some people urge for a comfortable lifestyle, contrasted other have a negative thought. Lets us look at both views before reaching a concrete decision
On the hand, the developing smart technology ensures obviously some benefits. The machine will be being much intelligent what’s mean gives higher value to human society. As smart home today, which bring together many devices, optimise energy consumption also allows a better lifestyle inside .it is clear that artificial intelligence can give a great life to humanity, an innovative device will treat or recognize a disease that will make people healthy in the world. while some create a new human behavior, perhaps negatively.
On the other hand , artificial technology has a negative effect on people.Some devices secrete radiation that attacks different parts of the body essentially the mind Also, gives a sense of anxiety if they aren't used according to the safety rules.Furthermore , he rejects some noble relations such as solidarity.Despite the negative effect of this new technical science, its increase helps humanity in terms of comfort and accuracy.
To end, I often agree that the artificial technology should develop and involving, but also you should take care with rules safety if we apply them
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1188.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00087912882 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713636363636 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.199871539 49.4020404114 241% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 148.5 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.875 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195715225254 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835722895023 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480611131225 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107507761698 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630089432455 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.15 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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