Nowadays, artificial intelligence is getting more and more prevalent and indispensable in our modern life. While artificial technology may bring some potential risks to humans, I still strongly believe that the advantages that it has are far more than its disadvantageous counterparts.
Some people are so concerned that with artificial technology upgrading, people will be getting more and more disadvantageous under those overly smart robots and be dominated one day in the future. They worry that the scene in those fiction movies may come true someday. Robots that are created and designed by humans are expected to progress too rapidly to be controlled by people. They may have their own independent thoughts and emotions, doing some destructive actions against human will. People are also afraid that computers are more intelligent than humans, which embarrasses the self-esteem as human "rulers".
Others, however, argue that artificial intelligence brings plenty of benefits to the human being, one of which is that it makes our life more convenient. Almost every electronic product in the present cannot be made without artificial intelligence. It is unimaginable to live a life without computers. People do business, make friends and learn about the world through the Internet, which strengthens the communication around the globe and create opportunities for people while in the past, ancient people have to walk through mountains and paths or ride horses for several days even months to meet others.
From my point of view, I hold the belief that artificial intelligence does free humans from heavy and arduous tasks that torture people in the past. You can find that there are no many workers on assembly lines in the factories and industries. Instead, what you can discover is that computer systems are managing machines to work organisedly, precisely and with no much efforts. Humans are freed from these repeated, arduous and dangerous tasks so that they can do more creative and meaningful work, which makes our world a more pleasant place to live.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
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Suggestion: now
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Suggestion: now
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Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33738601824 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92625144114 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586626139818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 545.4 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0538737087 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.066666667 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06120827912 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.328004303381 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945455954867 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680368087448 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191047931402 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392828636465 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.