Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is one of the keywords of our time, which will provide us with convenience and efficiency. The discussion now centers on whether the government should give more investment to internet access rather than transportation. In my opinion, I would argue that the government should try its best to develop the internet. I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, one of the reasons why the government should spend money on improving internet access is that people now heavily rely on it in every aspect of their lives. What that means is that the internet has become an essential and even indispensable tool. For example, students use the internet to search for information and study; adults do shopping online; those living or studying abroad communicate and interact with their families and friends through the internet. It has been difficult to imagine a world without the internet. Thus, this evidence highlights that governments should spare no efforts to develop the internet and make it conveniently and widely accessible to the public.
Another reason is that the internet indeed plays an important role in business. For instance, some companies keep in touch with their partners located thousands of millions of miles away by using internet; they usually do business with their oversea clients through it; many foreign trade corporations can have an online conference, which helps save money and time because they do not have to pay for the transportation fees and spend time to meet. Companies can manage to do more international business and make more profits if the government would like to support the internet’s development. Therefore, more investment should be given to promote the internet.
Finally, compared with transportation, there are still more drawbacks exist in the internet because the history of the internet system is much shorter than which of the transportation system. Take my grandparents as an example. They live in the countryside which is in the outside of the city. If they have a willing to visit us, there are various ways for them to choose, such as high-speed railway, bus and plane. However, if they want to contact with us, the only choice for them is to make a phone call because the internet is still not accessible or not stable yet throughout some parts of rural areas. Given this, the government should pay more money to develop the internet, which will let the internet covers more places all over the country.
In summary, I personally believe that by developing the internet, the quality of people's life will be improved apparently. Besides, it will stimulate the growth of a nation's economy. Lastly, it can connect people all over the world easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 167, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...ides, it will stimulate the growth of a nations economy. Lastly, it can connect people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, finally, however, if, lastly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.0752688172 211% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2322.0 1977.66487455 117% => OK
No of words: 457.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08096280088 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62358717085 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77934317825 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 212.727598566 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5295404814 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 719.1 618.680645161 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.1064553913 48.9658058833 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.545454545 100.406767564 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7727272727 20.6045352989 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.40909090909 5.45110844103 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314778449673 0.236089414692 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855023525958 0.076458572812 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606062894885 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17257098667 0.150856017488 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624410708591 0.0645574589148 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 10.9000537634 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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