Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
People should state their honest opinions even though they know others will disagree with their views.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
The past decades have witnessed huge progress in human rights around the globe, including the freedom of speech. People now are able to express opinions freely. However, some people still stand the point that one should not state his or her real opinions if others disapprove of it. In my opinion, people should speak out bravely without fear of disagreement.
First of all, only when people dare to speak frankly and argue fearlessly, can creativity be stimulated in that society. Evidences in the history have proven that great inventions always come with doubt and argument, which is a stimulus for making the invention better. For example, when the camera was invented, the opponents thought it a machine with evil force/power, which will do harm to human. Apparently, this is not true. From this case, we can see that disagreement is not necessarily a bad thing and it can encourage innovation.
What’s more, people can realize their prejudice and parochialism if they speak their minds despite argument against them. One of the reasons why people refuse to state their true thoughts when facing challenges is that they do not want to be criticized and are afraid of losing face. Instead, it is more important for people to reflect on those criticism, revise the wrong way they think, so that they can gain experience, broaden their minds, make improvements and finally become a wiser person. Therefore, people should express their ideas directly even though opponents would deny.
Last but not the least, those who have the courage to give free speech regardless of disagreement from others are more likely to be respected by others. When studying in school or working in the company, we are always encouraged to express our own ideas even our ideas are different from the teachers’ or the employees’. In fact, something new can bring development. From my own case, I can see that people who can show some ideas different from others are usually the top students in the class and the teacher will appreciate or focus on them more than others.
This essay discussed that stating opinions frankly despite others’ disagreement can spur creativity in society, help eliminate the prejudice and misunderstanding against others and earn more respect as well as appreciation. In conclusion, disagreement do not mean there must be something wrong with the ideas. What that means, in fact, is that something great has shown in your mind. People should bravely express their true ideas without any consideration about the possible criticism.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this criticism' or 'those criticisms'?
Suggestion: this criticism; those criticisms
...more important for people to reflect on those criticism, revise the wrong way they think, so th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ate or focus on them more than others. This essay discussed that stating opinio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, finally, first, frankly, however, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 9.8082437276 173% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 11.0286738351 163% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14593301435 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76692508168 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 650.7 618.680645161 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8606176464 48.9658058833 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.428571429 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9047619048 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 5.45110844103 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217274617386 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641265947213 0.076458572812 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508576903063 0.0737576698707 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123390594047 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652997671332 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.01818996416 99% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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