Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is important to know about events happening around the world, even if it is unlikely that they will affect your daily life.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
There are many things happened in the world, such as political conflicts, economic crisis, and important meetings. Important events come up everyday. Some people maintain that getting to know these new events is important, but others argue that it may be unesessary to know these numerous events. In my opinion, it is really important for people to know what happened everyday since it has significant impacts on people's value and communication. There are some details to explain my point of view.
First of all, people's value about the world can be influenced by the important events around the world. By watching political or economic news everyday, people they can understand the world better by recognizing the complexity of the world. For example, by watching the debate of president candidates in the US, we as foreigners can better understand the system of American election. Also, we might become familiar with the advantages of democratic society. In addition, if more people realize the poor living standard of the children in Africa, the children may receive more help due to the sympathy. Thus, knowing the events happening around the world is of great importance.
Another reason is that understanding the events happening around the world is also a good way to learn. By knowing more news and events, people can collect more resources and stories. These resources might have direct or indirect connection with their jobs. Besides, people can use resources that they accmulated in daily conversations or even their work presentations. By offering these events, their talks may become appealing for other people. For example, my father likes to use some important events in news to support his ided as he talks with others, which makes others learn more and think what my father say is trustworthy.
Admittedly, some of the important events are not relevent to our daily lives, and they might too far from we should know. However, if we see in a different aspect, these events can be recognize as positive and helpful stuff that adults can use to educate our children and tell them about values and students can leand as basic knowledge of this world.
To sum up, it is important for people to know some important events that happens everyday. By doing so, we can understand the world better and have something to utilize when expressing our points.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...may be unesessary to know these numerous events. In my opinion, it is really impo...
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...ther say is trustworthy. Admittedly, some of the important events are not relevent to ou...
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... tell them about values and students can leand as basic knowledge of this world. ...
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... to utilize when expressing our points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, if, may, really, so, thus, as for, for example, in addition, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1984.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 392.0 407.700716846 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0612244898 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63991543003 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.524837075471 95% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.49984076 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4761904762 100.406767564 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208031427202 0.236089414692 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746409355224 0.076458572812 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057544966008 0.0737576698707 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130887522162 0.150856017488 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0169579285787 0.0645574589148 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 86.8835125448 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.