Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Internet is one of the key words of our time, which will provide us with convenience and efficiency. Discussion now centers on whether government should give more investment to internet access rather than transportation. In my opinion, I would argue that government should try their best to develop the internet. I feel this way for three main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, one of the reasons why government should spend money on improving internet access is that people is more and more depending on internet. What that means is that internet has become an essential and even indispensable tool in our daily life. For example, we use the internet to study, do shopping, communicate with others and so on. Without internet, there will cause many troubles to us. It is government’s duty that they should spare no efforts to make people’s life better. Thus, this evidence highlights that more financial support should be given to make the internet access better.
Another reason for government should finance the internet access is that internet indeed help people a lot in business. For instance, some company use the internet to keep in touch with their partner who is far away from them; many foreign trade corporations have a meeting online, which helps them save a lot of precious time. One of the vital goals for government is to accelerate the growth of economy. Companies can manage to do more international business if the government would like to support internet’s development, which will contribute to increase the economy. Therefore, more investment should be given by government to promote the internet.
Finally, compared with the transportation, there is still more drawbacks exist in internet because the history of internet system is much shorter than which of transportation system. Take my grandparents as an example. They live in the countryside which is in the outside of the city. If they have a willing to visit us, there are various ways for them to choose, such as high-speed railway, bus and plane. However, if they want to contact with us, the only choice for them is to make a phone call because the internet is still not accessible or not stable yet throughout some parts of rural areas. Given this, government should pay more money to develop the internet, which will let the internet covers more places all over the country.
In summary, I personally believe that by developing the internet, the quality of people's life will be improved apparently. Besides, it will stimulate the growth of nation's economy. Lastly, it can connect people all over the world easily.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Internet is one of the key words of our time, which will provide us with...
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... if the government would like to support internet's development, which will ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, but, finally, however, if, lastly, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, in summary, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 9.8082437276 194% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.0752688172 235% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2224.0 1977.66487455 112% => OK
No of words: 439.0 407.700716846 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06605922551 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57737117129 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82791340834 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 212.727598566 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523917995444 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 24.0 20.6003584229 117% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6460617897 48.9658058833 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2916666667 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295775109855 0.236089414692 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0884910960216 0.076458572812 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739446036058 0.0737576698707 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174030476533 0.150856017488 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0668437709894 0.0645574589148 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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