Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more important for governments to spend money to improve Internet access than to improve public transportation.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Governments take great efforts to improve people’s living level and develop our country. They also have to decide the part that should be costing the most amount of money. Personally, spending money on improving Internet access is more important than improving public transportation.
Firstly, spending money to improve Internet access is more necessary and significant than public transportation. One of the reasons is that the Internet is the most essential thing in the modern world, and improving the Internet is effective to keep our country contact to the world. In this information-exploding era, countries around the globe are tightly connected, which is a process through the Internet. For example, we can do some global communication through the Internet, and we can also interact with some aspects of our culture. In this way, spending some money on developing Internet access is much more needed.
Another reason for the Internet's significance is that this is important to people's quality of life. Through the Internet, we can contact with families or friends living far from us; we can conveniently watch a movie or listen to fantastic music; we can also get some online study resources for our self-development. Without the Internet, our life will be boring, and we cannot live such a colorful life as today. Internet access is so important that the government are bound to spend some money on it.
Admittedly, improving public transportation is of importance. It is a big issue to save people time on commuting from home to working place. Besides, it will be quite environmental friendly if a developed public transportation system is developed. Despite this, public transportation is well enough to for many cities, and there is not much space to develop further. As a result, if the government spends a large amount of money on this, may the effect is not apparent and this will contributes to a waste of source.
To sum up, spending money to improve Internet access is more necessary and significant than public transportation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 484, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, well, as to, for example, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 15.1003584229 146% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 9.8082437276 112% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 43.0788530466 60% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1951951952 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13259996679 2.67179642975 117% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 212.727598566 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501501501502 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5337172518 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 100.406767564 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.6045352989 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.38888888889 5.45110844103 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358493788628 0.236089414692 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139576760226 0.076458572812 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1379114045 0.0737576698707 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.245405078124 0.150856017488 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0959646163978 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 58.1214874552 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 10.9000537634 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 86.8835125448 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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