According to some people, a competent teacher is essential for students to get good grades. Others insist that without the right attitude learners cannot achieve academic progress even if they have the guidance of a good teacher. Both views will be discussed in this essay.
First and foremost, I believe that a student is blessed if he comes in contact with the right teacher who can discover his abilities. Many of the boring lectures and mathematical problems can ignite interest in students if they are taught in the right way. For instance, I am a person who does not like mathematics, but when I entered high school, I was able to score full marks in maths only because of the faith my teacher had in me. If it wasn’t for my teacher, I would still underestimate my ability to learn maths.
On the contrary, many people believe that the attitude of students plays a vital role in their educational success. Even a good teacher cannot help to arouse / incite interest in those students who do not possess the will to learn. One of my friends has great interest in sports and hence he does not attend any lectures saying that good marks will not help him to win a medal. However, by chance even if he attends the class, he does not care to pay attention. Needless to say, although his teachers are good, he never gets good marks.
To conclude, the chances of attaining academic success primarily depends on the student’s attitude. Even the finest teachers cannot help a student who has no interest in studying.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, for instance, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1259.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71535580524 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52947373143 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584269662921 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5243590999 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9285714286 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268469324854 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936756717923 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661718142425 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164872479275 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605072150566 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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