The majority of global citizens consider that all persons should be waived tuition and deserved to follow tertiary education whatever their socio-economic backgrounds are. I somewhat agree with this opinion because free-college policy supports so much for talented students, who will most likely to success if they are entitled to attend tertiary
The first compelling reason why I think abolishing tuition fees for students, who have a difficult financial status is necessary because this help government can discover and nurture many talented people to support for their own countries. As unconditional pupils are learned further will seek a better job help their family change the living standard of their descendants; as well as, they will bring the diligent, intelligent characters to dedicate to different fields of their own nations and make their states develop more. In particular, graduated student from universities will open their own companies, or cooperate with foreign organizations, and even contribute their power to government, so on. In addition, all activities of the students can make thriving economy for their states although it is numerous or tiny. Taking a curriculum as a prime example, Europe nations have known as educated states, where both domestic and foreign students can be waived tuition by the governments of the countries. As a result, the policy has been noticed by many brilliant personalities go to live and work at the places; therefore, Europe nations have increased their economy vertically and the places becomes a dream destination for talented persons in the world.
However, it is sometimes argued that tuition exemption also negatively impacts on the rate of unemployment. The reason for this is the influx of pursuing higher education is increased by the policy that makes the number of bachelor’s degree holders are increasingly. As a result, this leads to candidates who want to work at companies is been required more and more highly by the intense competition rate between the large number of high-skilled workers.
In conclusion, I somewhat believe that no matter who is staying any socio-economic background they deserve to be entitled to university education without tuition fee. This is because the policy helps the nations seek the brilliant persons to support government. However, I admit that sometimes the right makes the competition rate increasingly
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 277, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to further'
Suggestion: to further
...es. As unconditional pupils are learned further will seek a better job help their famil...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, therefore, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41644562334 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96044274318 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.546419098143 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 641.7 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0283909331 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.076923077 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186906295373 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650093530914 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499686508693 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109298635733 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0438354961115 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.75 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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