Some people believe that government should make investment in building public libraries in every town, while others think it is a waste of money because we have access to information via internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this concurrent world,it is undoubtedly true that,modern technology and library plays a very healthy role through out the our life.some people concur that,government should make investment for building new libraries.while other group of thinkers say that, it is waste of money because we have one way to share all information via modern technology. Actually both has it's on pros and cons.However i quibble from them and propund that,i think we should not weaste money on building libraries.
on the one hand,advocates avidence are obtainable to substitute the concept of whay we should not weast money on libraries.The top notch concert resone is we have a great access of internet so must use it.another relational which can hauls me to petron is internet is a very good way to save country money.Beacuse if people wants to read any type of book on internet they easily download on internet.
on the other hand.life is like coin.Pleasure and oain thare are two side of coin.one side visible at a tie so the public in generla tend to coherent that via internet we should share anykind of information related education as well as historical content .On a contrary library is the silent olace for reading and its gives great atmosphere for student and also for readers.However but internet is more usefull and it is saving our important time so government sould spend money on upgrading internet excess instead of building new libraries.
in conclusions,i oen down to say that,both has it is how benifits and drawbacks.But internet is the one accesse and it's benifits are more instead of libraries.so government or surveillance should spend money on internet because it is fater cheppest and vital access.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08510638298 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06402678642 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599290780142 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.565564424 49.4020404114 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 286.8 106.682146367 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.4 20.7667163134 272% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6 7.06120827912 320% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315057916519 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172243635521 0.084324248473 204% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276457503647 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18539196872 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418577039878 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.7 13.0946893788 234% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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