Some people believe that the government should make laws regarding nutrition and healthy lifestyle, while others think that it is a matter of personal responsibility. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
It is believed that the authorities should adopt laws concerning nutrition and healthy lifestyle, however, it is argued that the each individual is responsible for it. I am firmly convinced that nutrition and lifestyle depend on personal preference but the government also plays a vitally important role in guiding people to select the healthy choice.
On the one hand, having rules regarding nutrition and lifestyle by the politicians is incredibly advantageous. The most significant perk is that the laws can protect the public’s health. Since people must obey to the rules, they can lead a healthy lifestyfe and have the right choice of nutrious food, instead of a sedentary lifestyle as well as lack of nutrition. This minimizes the number of patients, therefore, decrease the pressure on healthcare system, which is a positive development. The examples can be seen in North Korea, where the obesity rate is incredibly low
On the other hand, it is widely reckoned that health-related choices can be made by each person. First and foremost, there is no doubt that with the government’s laws, people lose the freedom of making decision about their health. Not only do they have little choice on food but they also develop independence. Secondly, a plethora of dinning establishments will suffer from the lack of ingerdients, especially fast food chains, which may trigger bankruptcy. This adversely effect the national economy since the food and drink industry is of great importance to any countries.
With above-mentioned arguments, It is a belief of mine that as regards to nutrition and healthy lifestyle, it is the individual responsiblitity but it can be improved with the lead of the authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as regards, no doubt, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07941391869 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581818181818 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2736128548 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9166666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.4166666667 7.06120827912 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199204979839 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658360635214 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626589064363 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122689871289 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0779572416872 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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