Some people believe that high school shall teach academic subjects like physics and math, others believe it shall teach applied subjects like bakery.
Discuss both view and give your opinion
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that children in schools ought to be taught academic subjects such as physics and math, while there are others who argue that schools should have applied subjects like bakery. In my opinion, while schools mostly have academic subjects, I believe that children should choose what to study by themselves.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that schools teach children to academic subjects as it is beneficial for them in future life. In other words, subject such as math and physics are essential for all individuals as it helps to enter to the university or to secure a good job. For example, in Uzbekistan children at high school have math lessons every day, as in order to enter to any university students should pass math exams.
On the other hand, according to some, children should learn applied subjects as bakery as it can help them to find a job straight after school. This is because bakery industry is the most developing sphere in business world and companies suffer in order to find employees. As a result, companies and businesses hire young people to their business right after the school.
Finally, I consider that children should choose the subjects to learn by themselves. As only children know what kind of jobs do they want to have in future and what kind of talents do they want to improve. Another point to consider is that when people make a choice by themselves they feel more happier.
In conclusion, although math and physics can help children to secure a good job in future and become successful, I consider that all children should have a freedom of choice.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: HELP_TO_FIND[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'help them find' instead.
Suggestion: help them find
...rn applied subjects as bakery as it can help them to find a job straight after school. This is be...
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Line 4, column 290, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'happier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: happier
...e make a choice by themselves they feel more happier. In conclusion, although math and phys...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'freedom'.
Suggestion: freedom
... consider that all children should have a freedom of choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80918727915 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48637737369 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491166077739 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7953286834 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5833333333 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252280793342 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962933877893 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878329855224 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135032033115 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101941318748 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.18 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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