Some people believe that history has no value in the contemporary world. But some believe that we still need history to learn from the past.
Discuss both viewpoints and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, history is not given any value, but some strongly think that we need history to learn from the past.So, let's talk about both the views in this writing.We can't just keep aside the history from us , at the same time we can't run away from the past. Both are right in their own ways.
Here in this paragarph let's talk about the people who believe that history has no value in this temporary world.As the technology is improving, we all have started using the machines that can predict the future.Seeing the improvement in this area, no one is caring about the past. This kind of environment is creating the people to avoid thinking about the past.People have advanced themselves in a such a way that, they are addicted to the shortcuts rather than any classical methods.This has created the people to think more about future than past.
In contrast to it, some people think that we still need to learn from the past.This statement is true because, all our teachings have been taught by our ancestors. Without any history we might not have any proper information with us.So, it is necessary to know about the past. We can learn many classical things as well as remedies from the past.Though, finding out the information from the past is quite long taking process, but it will surely have deep meaning behind it.Many archaelogical sites have proved the classical ways are long lasting even though it has consumed a lot of time to think on it.
At the end, I would say that accepting history and moving on is all dependent on us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, still, well, in contrast, kind of, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1264.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66420664207 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47171499166 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 386.1 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.8495743606 49.4020404114 202% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 158.0 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.875 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278964155577 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120781341117 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768866786022 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162887667267 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836474721262 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.9 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.34 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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