Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
According to the statement, some masses consider that hobbies could be difficult and challenging. However, I represent disagreement towards this notion because this varies from person to person and every individual have their own passion and choice. Both the views are explained in the upcoming paragraphs.
On the one hand, there are numerous individuals who believe that hobbies need to be difficult and challenging. The first and foremost reason behind this is satisfaction. Because, there are plenty of hobbies such as river rafting, mountain climbing and so on which gives inclination of challenges because these include risk and higher experience. Due to which, individuals become able to complete these challenges for their satisfaction, achievements and experienced. For instance, there are number of youngsters who plays cricket from their childhood. Since, that decades, they desired to build their bright career in cricket field. Nowadays, there are many of them who becomes successful towards their desires and in present duration, they play for their nations and make proud them. Secondly, the another factor behind difficult and challenged hobbies is to get rid of their threat. Because, some masses are suffered from phobia especially from water or maximum height. Thus, due to this, they admire themselves to accept those challenges and become probable to exit from their phobia and get satisfaction.
On controversy, some of the individuals consider hobbies are form of relaxation of mind and enjoy their leisure time by doing such hobbies in which they show their interest. Such hobbies are easy and admirable as collection of stamps, coins, reading fictions and so on. In this criteria, there are plethora of masses who have hobbies to collect such unique items as stamps, coins, pebbles and so on which gives them pleasure and part of entertainment in their own way. In the second place, few of individuals admire their hobbies towards reading books or collect different categories of books. In this criteria, they beleive, via this manner, they proliferate their knowledge and informative skills in all sections. Because, by reading various sections of books, they become viable to get details about the culture, history, innovations and so on of foreign nations.
To recapitulate, according to my outlook, hobbies are vary from person to person because some masses do challenging hobbies for their satisfaction and career, however, some individuals prefer easy and enjoyable activities which they do in their leisure time for their pleasure of mind and knowledge so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, thus, for instance, such as, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2188.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37592137592 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77045957829 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 662.4 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4513074688 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.4 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.35 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14070378116 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524058752547 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826487983537 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10339161765 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.020894181368 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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