Sports events have many influential effects on a country's economy, especially for those who have hosted a big event like the Olympic games, which has an international impact. Media coverage attracts millions of people to visit this country, therefore there is an opportunity to attract big organizations to invest and earn a lot of revenue which will be beneficial for a country in terms of achieving economic prosperity. But some people have dissented the idea. In the following paragraphs, both will be discussed and finally, my opinion will be given.
On the one hand, the hype of sports brings a lot of foreign currency. From that government has got a huge amount of tax which increases the efficiency of development of a country. For example, the English Premier League is one of the biggest events in the world, and every year the UK government gets plenty of revenue from this event. Moreover, cinematography and local media help to attract people to visit tourist places. For instance, in the cricket game after finishing an over or during the breaks the channel always highlights the places which are full of natural beauty, the historical places, and so on. Therefore, overseas people feel interested to look over these figures. Furthermore, it opens a new door for international trade and business because many big companies sponsor these events. If they find a suitable environment they will invest money, as a result, the employment rate will increase and the government will get more taxes.
On the other hand, it is so costly for a poor country whose economy is not established, and it will be difficult for them to host such kinds of big events. Spending a huge amount of money on these events will create a deficit on their national budget which will hinder the path of development. In the long run, it will be a great threat to culture and tradition.
In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, it is clear that hosting an event has more advantages than disadvantages. In my opinion, will go with the former statement.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1708.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90804597701 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78481932179 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.2010614666 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.470588235 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4705882353 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.41176470588 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214378856483 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680499016814 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546257284662 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124988157337 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0622923079853 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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