Some people believe that improve public health should increase the number of sports facilities; others believe that it has little effects and need other measures to improve it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There have been divided opinions on the topic of built sport facilities for people’s health. Some are of the opinion that the construction of new sport facilities are definitely needed in an environment where people’s health is in decline state. However, others argue that it is not appropriate solution for the same. Therefore, ahead of my inclination, both views should be analysed.
Examining the former view, Physical activities plays major role to vanish ample health problems and diseases. Explaining it how, Peoples are suffering from many body related issues like obesity, overweight. Reason behind it is lack of exercises in routine schedule. Citizens can overcome this problems if they can get essential facilities related to sports. Furthermore, they admit that less sport facilities is cause of less involvement in sports activities. More sport clubs helps to encourage people to spend proper time toward their physical fitness. Sometimes people want to join sports clubs, but they can not because of less availability of it. Moreover, it is irrefutable fact that mind development of child is at high rate , who is active in physical exercise than who do not want to play games. Thus, sports facilities are astronomically important for good health of people.
On the flip side, a few others are of the opposite opinion. They prefer to tell that without sport facilities, people can be stay fit and fine. People can do activities like yoga, pranayama at balcony or terrace of their own home or at any nearest garden. It is really helpful to maintain body process and remove health problems like obesity. Moreover, more sports facilities lead to high financial burden on government because it require proper maintenance.
To conclude and give my opinion that excellent sport facilities help people to keep their self healthy. However, without that facilities, people can do exercise by own everyday. Only less sports club is not responsible for their good health. Thus, people should not blame on sports facilities for their fitness.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, therefore, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1733.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26747720365 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78509248115 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562310030395 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8015711611 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.7727272727 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9545454545 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 7.06120827912 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197133003475 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636973050506 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423482549778 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140973216419 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494020202387 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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