Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory, job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
There is some voice claiming that human beings ought to accept their situation no matter how bad they are. While as far as I am concerned, it is of paramount importance for individuals to cheer up and ameliorate such painfulness by enhancing their quality of life, as we will see.
On the one hand, there do exist some situation when accepting them is the better choice. For instance, if people could not alter such kind of dilemma with their own effort, they might probably be advised to accept it and try to enjoy it. Under that circumstance, the only thing one person has the ability to do is to accept it, experiencing the flow of time. However, in general, the demerits of accepting the relative stable position do outweigh its merits. Since such kind of thought makes individuals get satisfied to themselves easily. Even though they are actually not elite enough, which lead to weaker peer pressure, prompting other changes such as less productivity or no creativity whatsoever.
On the other hand, nobody can deny that the believing of fighting for better life exerts positive impact on not only individuals, but also the whole society. With such belief, for instance, when confronted with failure, people would work/study harder than before, setting tougher objectives to accomplish. In that case, whether they make it or not, they become better person, feeling fulfilled during the process. What is more is that, individuals might pursue further education or gain advanced skills, such as learning to speak second language, due to this unsatisfied emotional feeling as well. Additionally, competitive spirit can be manifestly seen over those attempts, and healthy rivalry benefits industries and the society a lot.
To sum up, we can arrive at an undeniable conclusion that although accepting current situation may sometimes help, pursuing better life and trying to switch negative position benefits more overall.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stable position do outweigh its merits. Since such kind of thought makes individuals ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, however, if, may, second, so, well, while, for instance, in general, kind of, such as, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1622.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19871794872 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7119248679 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660256410256 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.351009569 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.857142857 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7142857143 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207701508906 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649846801208 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431026292313 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120707052064 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238286226112 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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