Some parents like to help the children with their homework. Some think that it is positive for the children, other think it is negative for their children. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nobody can deny that support form modern parents is of paramount importance for teenagers to finish their homework. However, we should by no means neglect drawbacks of this approach, as we will see.
On the one hand, it may appear advisable for adults to help with their kids by giving suggestions about their assignments. This allows children gain a through consideration from various aspects, hopefully leading to an absence of problems such as ignoring or forgetting some points when tackling problems. Furthermore, helping and caring from parents should reduce the risk of students playing truant from school, or coming under the influence of negative peer pressure.
On the other hand, we have to ask whether this is a practical proposition. When adults keep their eyes on teenagers' work behavior, it is inevitable that a dwindling number of the time parents themselves can stay alone can be seen. To be more specific, it is the leisure time that parents could have utilized to recharge their batteries or to get further education, which means higher pressure and worse career prospects in their workplace.
To conclude it, it appears that, while helping pupils with their works and assignments is essential for better academic performance and higher possibility of finishing school, there are definite demerits associated with this issue as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 151, Rule ID: THROUGH_THOROUGH[1]
Message: Did you mean 'thorough' (accurate, exhaustive)?
Suggestion: thorough
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, while, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1141.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25806451613 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72670906831 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663594470046 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.6307894678 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.777777778 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246742367401 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0878475401735 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598891283613 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13197103321 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480895227362 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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