Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
People have different opinions about perceiving a particular situation. The proponent has provided two school of thoughts. First, one should accept any unfavourable situation and consider it as fate. Second, one should work hard to escape the unfavourable situation. The essay will argue that why the latter opinion is better one.
First, the decision to accept the unfavourable situation might depend on circumstances of the person. As one cannot control everything, giving up is the right option. Trying to mend the impossible will be wastage of time and energy. For instance, a student scoring B may consider it as fate and will accept it. He might feel motivated to study harder for the next exam and score better. So sometimes giving up can open a new opportunity and might prove to be beneficial for some people.
On the other hand, people argue that one must work harder to get out of difficult situation. This is the advice that one receives in every stage of life since childhood. No matter how hard the situation is, through hard work and determination one can overcome the difficult situation. For instance, Cristiano Ronaldo had a financially weak background. But by taking up part time jobs and working hard he was able to continue his coaching classes. This has helped him to become world’s highest paid sportsperson. So, one can achieve anything with right amount of determination and hard work.
This essay has argued that hard work is the key to success. Attributing the failures to fate might be the option in some cases but is not always true. In my opinion one should work hard and be determined to escape the quandary.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 370, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ially weak background. But by taking up part time jobs and working hard he was able to co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, for instance, in my opinion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1375.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94604316547 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.728727284 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564748201439 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 15.5547456867 49.4020404114 31% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 65.4761904762 106.682146367 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.47619047619 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121671803808 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384395684456 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349254422069 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0790938593284 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028100829359 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 13.0946893788 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.54 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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