Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is true that people have to cope with many unlucky situations during their life. While some people think that the best solution is to accept that cases, I would argue that people should effort to change bad situations to receive better results.
There are some powerful reasons why people should accept the situation make them feel unsatisfied. Firstly, the bad situations such as an unsatisfactory job or lack of money happened might be a result of the less effortless. In other words, people are given the chance to that help them study to acquire knowledge which will help them find a job with high salary in the future, but many students do not appreciate that chance and give up or do not try to get the best result. Therefore, they will not have enough conditions to meet the requirement of companies. Consequently, the only way is to accept doing the job with low benefits. Secondly, there are a large of number people who lose ability to earn money or find a job. For example, the disable people invariably struggle in finding a job with low payment to help them can make ends meet, so when other people have a job eventhough they feel it boring, they better way is is try to accept it rather than become an employed.
On the other hand, I agree with those who believe that people should try to improve the bad situations. When people attempt to find a new way or radical solutions to change the bad situations, the results always become better. Morover, this process will bring many benefits for people. They will gain experience and become more confident when they can change an unlucky situation and get a good results. The improvement will receive a deserve award. For instance, students do not chance to study but they try to hard working can get a scholarship and will study in a school with better condition.
In conclusion, although some particular reasons lead to people must accept the bad situations, it seems to me that the effort in changing and improving always bring good results.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71022727273 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50616491941 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.480113636364 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.301665238 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.625 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9375 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306831284423 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103242302312 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0749342999044 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187504220858 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629662097153 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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