In the modern era, when having witnessed any obstacle in life, people with different characteristics and backgrounds would have distinct reactions and attitudes towards it. The question of whether it is better to leave tough experiences alone and try to recover from it or people should try to take measures to deal with it has aroused a debate. In this essay, I would scrutinize both views and show my approval with the later one.
On the one hand, it is understandable the reason underlying why a school of thought that the optimal ways to get through the difficulty of lack of employment and financial budget is to accept the current situation. The key rationale is that the negative feeling of being jobless or poor could have a detrimental bearing on human living standards, especially in our mental health. Admittedly, without jobs and money, people hardly achieve their desired lifestyle. However, negative thoughts are more dangerous since it creates a high level of stress preventing workers from enjoying their lives as well as discourages them to perform better. This, thus, could deteriorate the work’s productivity which could further result in irreversible impact on both scales of individuals and society.
On the other hand, while acknowledging the merits of self-recovering, I still believe that people should attempt to solve the problems before quitting. In the first place, this practice could be an opportunity for workers to learn and improve themselves. For example, for the youngsters to start their own business, researchers have carried out that most of them were unlikely to be successful in the first place, but their later achievements appeared to have better effects. It is explained by the fact that they try to analyze their past mistakes and be aware of them in the next endeavor. Further, the sense of regret could also be avoided when people take actions to cope with their bad situation. Granted, no one could confirm the efficiency of these plans, yet when looking back into the past, they could be pleased that they have given their best shot already.
In conclusion, while the benefits of accepting bad situations are remarkable, I believe that it would be better for people to take actions to deal with those circumstances before having other thoughts.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 174, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
...nct reactions and attitudes towards it. The question of whether it is better to leave tough experiences...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, so, still, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in the first place, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 24.0651302605 158% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1929.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11671087533 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79617621251 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57824933687 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.9964339607 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.6 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1333333333 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150010457888 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504165667147 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423364771052 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101185219981 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0447485944417 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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