After a long period of suffering from Covid’s lockdown, besides having detrimental bearing on the social systems, including finance and welfare policies…, this disease also gives rise to a rapid trend of a bulk of people who would prefer working for their own companies to being employed. In the essay, I would indicate the reason underlying this phenomenon and give several demerits of it.
More and more teenagers decided to build up their own career path instead of applying for big organizations. I believe that the great sense of freedom could be the key rationale for the current suitable. For granted, people would have flexibility in arranging their schedules as well as their working places. It, thus, could result in a more favourable working atmosphere and further reduce the level of work’ pressure which could somehow become the culprit of lower productivity. This is compounded by the fact that the people could not have to follow rules and the others’ order. Many employees have confessed that they were afraid of the bosses in the workplaces since they sometimes find it difficult fulfilling the expectations.
However, the rising trend of self-employment still consists of a great deal of disadvantages. To begin with, young start-up organizations have a tendency to be misguided. In fact, many researchers have carried out that most of the young people who build businesses from scratch are more likely to fail on their first attempt because of useful experiences and opinion from the seniors. Moreover, when facing an obstacle, a young start-up could independently solve the problem. In the long term, it could reduce one’s passionation in tandem with the increase of tension which is no less serious with the aforementioned problem of being employed.
In conclusion, independence could turn out to be an explanation why teenagers are turning their backs with big companies and starting their own businesses. However, there still remains some difficulties for people to tackle.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1697.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28660436137 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90399162877 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585669781931 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.4679969442 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.133333333 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240392292864 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768378691023 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477874096254 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142883606249 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149452103106 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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