Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Sometimes people face untoward situation and their behavior is different. Part of them decide not to change anything, but others are sure that they have to make something to improve their position.
On one hand, the situation, when people accept their position can happen due to absence of motivation. They do not have wishes to change something, they just work for their boring job and think that it is normal being for them. Moreover, some people get hobbits and they are afraid changes or something new, such as the other responsibilities. Therefore they continue to work there without any growth. In addition, such behavior can be if people live in the small towns, where there is lack of opportunities, they lose a hope to get something more than they have. For example, according to the research of MSU sociologists, more than 80 percent of people are sure that they can not to develop their profit owing to living in the small city.
On the other side, some people can not adopt the situation, because they want to have a worthy live. In contrast people who accept their position, these try to change everything to improve their live. In fact, they are very confident, what gives them opportunity to find appropriate occupation and earn enough money. Further, such person always achieve their purpose and never stop there, because they constantly develop their abilities. For instance, Marie Curie has won the first Nobel Prize in 1903, but she did not stop continued her work, what brought her second Nobel Prize in 1911.
In conclusion, I can say that, some people ready to accept their life, but others are sure that they can live better and strive to make something for it. As for me, people should develop their live improving the bad situation, because everyone deserves a better life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 276, Rule ID: I_AFRAID[8]
Message: The adjective afraid is used with 'of': 'afraid of changes'.
Suggestion: afraid of changes
...r, some people get hobbits and they are afraid changes or something new, such as the other res...
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Line 2, column 345, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ew, such as the other responsibilities. Therefore they continue to work there without any...
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Line 3, column 104, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...use they want to have a worthy live. In contrast people who accept their position, these...
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Line 3, column 471, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ities. For instance, Marie Curie has won the first Nobel Prize in 1903, but she d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86970684039 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46876744086 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547231270358 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.88948041 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4666666667 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154370976476 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641570756925 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438094166019 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108617320111 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0157989356896 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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