Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to improve such situations Discuss both views and give your opinion
Every individual has witnessed that life is neither a boon or a bane. Amidst the rise and fall of the life events, there are people who claimed to practise acceptance for the unfavourable life conditions while some advocate to put their utmost effort in order to make such conditions better. This essay will provide both scopes of views, followed by my own preference.
The former view is acceptable as it is inevitable for people to find satisfaction facing the difficult situations in the case of economic crisis or political turmoil. In mentioned situations, the individuals have no other choices to make a distinct change rather than adapting themselves according to the circumstances in order to survive. For example, wages will be lowered significantly during the global financial crisis. People's daily lives will be highly impacted causing the suffering of low-income households. However, as the crisis is global, spreading all over the place, regardless of social status of the location, which forces people to accept the circumstance, instead of feeling miserable.
I personally prefer the second viewpoint which can make individuals more resilient in facing life conditions. Many real-life evidence can be observed in order to support the view that is to keep trying and developing the encountered misery. For instance, Daw Aung San Suu Kyi was placed under house arrest for 20 years with no slight hope of escaping during military junta. However, with her continuous quest for democracy and perseverance to build a society with social justice, the 20 years of house arrest does not stop her to be one of the most admired ladies of Myanmar
To conclude, while accepting unfavourable life events is common, it is uncommon and unnecessary to let life unfold without working hard to overcome the struggles.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1532.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22866894198 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85927803561 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641638225256 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 79.8144984741 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.666666667 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4166666667 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102047363692 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0344038329093 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428624307498 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0578857829662 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.042491971215 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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