Although it seems like common place for lots of people who are prone to succumb to any dilemma without fighting against, my firm conviction is that sparing no effort to struggle ,no matter how harsh the circumstance is, will definitely achieve improvements whether on incomes and careers.
Admitted apparently, unsatisfying occupation and limited revenue do happen all the time; Comparing with the risk and knock-door effects, it is advisable to endure those unpleasant situations rather than taking some actions to adjust oneself. On the one hand, escaping from a disturbing environment is one thing, whereas hunting for an ideal one is another. Those who have decided to make changes have to suffer from the shortage of payment lasting for several months to half a year, or even a few years especially in the background of financial crisis. To guarantee the normal routine of daily life and expenditure in the family, people tend to remain where they are now instead of altering for new places, let alone the rate of success is rare.
However, people with the above ideas ignore the basic fact that the real nature of human life lies in the continuous fight with their surroundings rather than staying the original state. Were no improvements gained by endless fight with the nature, it would have been stone age now: A typical example is Steven Jobs who had been driven out the Apple INC. created by himself for failing to achieve the similar views on the design of products and the way of operating the company by the broad of the company. Being immune to be blue, he formed the PIXAR and NEXT, which conquered the markets with the astonishing production named TOY STORY and the brand-new operating systems respectively, earning millions of dollars in almost one night. Vise versa, if he surrendered to what happened on him, the only possible result would have been no difference with normal people and there would no miracle occurred in our lives to overthrow the throne belonging to Blackberry and Nokia, which dominated the every corner of the earth with tame and heavy devices. That will doom to be the misfortune of our times.
In conclusion, people shall take no hesitation to fight with fates in the light of the above discussions, sometimes it maybe not improved extremely obvious in our living standard, but as long as they keep on with the achievement accumulated day by day, it is no doubt that a promising future is waiting ahead .
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 178, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...on is that sparing no effort to struggle ,no matter how harsh the circumstance is,...
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Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Created
... who had been driven out the Apple INC. created by himself for failing to achieve the s...
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Line 7, column 309, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...that a promising future is waiting ahead .
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Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t a promising future is waiting ahead .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, however, if, may, so, whereas, in conclusion, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 41.998997996 155% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2047.0 1615.20841683 127% => OK
No of words: 415.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93253012048 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60488981577 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 259.0 176.041082164 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624096385542 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 34.0 20.2975951904 168% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.5911425587 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 170.583333333 106.682146367 160% => OK
Words per sentence: 34.5833333333 20.7667163134 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.91666666667 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0556890009414 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0196659805061 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0108909757962 0.0667982634062 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0334831248824 0.151304729494 22% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00269627057248 0.056905535591 5% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.97 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.6 10.1190380762 154% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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