In unpleasant situations, people act in controversial ways. While situations such as poverty are considered inevitable by some people, I firmly believe appropriate actions need to pursue by individuals to promote the quality of their lives.
Personal and societal difficulties normally have brought a sense of unwillingness to make an effort for progress. Some people might have cautious personalities, which means they avoid risky changes. For instance, withdrawing a current career aimed at following their preferred work seems unreasonable to them. Despite the psychological causes, illiteracy and people's laziness have made the situation worse. These group of people often argue their restricted abilities have been obligated them to remain stable. On a large scale, poor societal and economic conditions have become contributing factors. Family breakdowns due to unemployment, lack of efficient education system and so on can be such examples that deprive people of following their ambitions.
In my opinion, attempting intended to promotion should be an indispensable part of any life. Positive attitude toward life not only brings a sense of peace of mind but also inspire people to endeavor for their dreams. If optimistic sight accompanies with a practical plan, accomplishment will result. Take Ronaldo as an example. He was born in a poor family, but he determined himself to hard work and overwhelming exercise. The outcome has been a role model for youths throughout the world. Finally, vibrant and growth stemming from motivated dwellers have felt in society.
in conclusion, people should do their best to improve their fate and the results will be beneficial for the personals and the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78884462151 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32452394859 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701195219124 0.561755894193 125% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.060937666 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.3 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.2 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117445103213 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0425968995921 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0417939326733 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766961152415 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302688687743 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.6 12.4159519038 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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