TPO 45- independent writing taskDo you agree or disagree with the following statement?In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.Use s

It is inconvertibly axiomatic that parents have a pivotal role in building the young's characteristics. Throughout history, there are many examples that reveal the fact that effective and useless citizens in any given society occasionally learn from their parents. But nowadays the conditions are more various. A controversial question which is often raised regarding this issue is whether people in today's world are less dependent on their parents' decisions or not. Some people are inclined towards the idea that nothing has changed and like past time, parents affect their young's decisions, and some hold the exact opposite view. Considering today's conditions. I strongly contend that youngs are kind of independent of their parents at the present time. In what follows, I will aptly elucidate my viewpoint.
The first exquisite point to be mentioned is that today's fast development of technologies like, phone, computers, and so on, would certainly affect a person's knowledge. Due to the fact that youngs can update their information rapidly, they get always in front of their parents and they do not need their advice or decision making for them. An example will illustrate this point much better. Imagine a young person who knows about a danger of traveling by car rather than the train, and the father force him to travel with car, obviously, the young wouldn't listen to his father because he knows about the merits of traveling with train by getting up to date information about transportations.
Another equally significant point to be mentioned is that the level of education has been changed these days and almost all youngs have a higher educational degree in comparison with their parents. Result of recent statistics conducted by the government of the United States reveal that over 90 percent of the young US citizens are more educated from previous generation, which means that they are more authentic to make wise decisions instead of getting order from their parents.
Finally, the situation in the past was different. In past days families were parent-oriented, which means parent made the final decisions. Furthermore, since the power was in the parents' hands, youngs couldn’t disobey them due to the fact that they could be deprived of family resources. By contrast, nowadays youngs get independent as soon as they get to 18. They will start a new life and a new job that makes them to become independent.
IN brief, contemplating all the aforementioned reasons, as soon realizes that nowadays youngs do not need their parent to make decisions for them in comparison with the youngs in the past. This is for some reasons like technological development, education, and youngs economic independence. It is worth mentioning that parents always want the best for their children and respecting them is highly recommended for the young. Nevertheless, that was a story of a nutshell. Obviously, there are various points that are not mentioned here. At last, it is crucial to remind one's should not forget what a parent had done for raising a person.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 543, Rule ID: PAST_TIME[1]
Message: Did you mean 'pastime'?
Suggestion: pastime
... idea that nothing has changed and like past time, parents affect their youngs decisions,...
Line 3, column 151, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's, and so on, would certainly affect a persons knowledge. Due to the fact that youngs ...
Line 3, column 240, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put before the verb 'get'.
Suggestion: always get
... update their information rapidly, they get always in front of their parents and they do n...
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...o travel with car, obviously, the young wouldnt listen to his father because he knows a...

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, in brief, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 11.0286738351 181% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.0752688172 124% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2575.0 1977.66487455 130% => OK
No of words: 500.0 407.700716846 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.72870804502 4.48103885553 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85484220229 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 267.0 212.727598566 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 777.6 618.680645161 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.86738351254 268% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.3784739818 48.9658058833 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.0 100.406767564 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.45110844103 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.369773080157 0.236089414692 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898399150716 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796507845611 0.0737576698707 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203406215177 0.150856017488 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534554084123 0.0645574589148 83% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 58.1214874552 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 86.8835125448 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?


Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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